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expected joys of the Evening, she felt a littleuncomfortable in the thought idea of all that wasto fo precede them. Her conversation with Eliz.Elizabethtoo had givening1 her some very many unpleasant2 feel:=lings,  with respect to her own family; &had3 to add to the awkwardneſs of somade her more open to other any disagreable im: slight an acquaintance to the consciousneſs from any other cause, & in particular to of: preſsions,  the awkwardneſs rushing into Intimacy on& encreased her sense of the awkwardneſs4 of so slight an ac::quaintance.5 seemed a serious Evil. There wasnothing in the manners of Mrs . or Miſs Edwardesto give immediate change diſsipation to these Ideas; the Mother tho'though was a very friendly woman, had a reserved but of ratherair, & a great formal aspect, & deal of formal Civility — & thedaughter, a the genteel looking girl,of 22 with her hairin papers, seemed very as was naturally6 to have caughtsomething of the Stile of the Mother who had broughther up. –  Emma She was soon left to know what theycould be, by Eliz.'sElizabeth's being obliged to hurry away –& some very, very languid remarks on the pro::bable Brilliancy of the Ball, were all that broke at intervals a silence of half an hourbefore they were joined by the Master of thehouse. — Mr . Edwards had a much easier, &morecommunicative air than the Ladies of the Family;he was fresh from the Street, & he came entered ready

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Originally 'unpleasi[ng]'? Back to context...
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